Chariss- Assement of previous work

Strenghs: There location i thought was a really good place to shoot there film, it reminded me of a clip from Let Me In also they didnt need a script, you could understand very clearly what was happening. The different shots used at the start when she is walking by herself i thought made it really effective and flowed really well.

Weakness': I think more shots could of been added, for example more close-ups of the vampire and a few more mis shots, because there were alot of long shots used. When the guy who finds her the next day is walking down the path and is show from a sideview the camera jolts a few times, so if it was panned smoothly i thought it may have been a better shot.

You can tell this is a horror film, by it being shot at night and the music used and by the end of it when she is gets bitten.

There are a few shots used, but more could of been added; close-ups, mid shots.

The Rule of thirds in this film are used well, you have your eye on the victim all the time because of her being on the golden mean.

This film flowed really well, there were no jump shots or anything major that made you loose your concentration during the film.

The lighting used could of been better, but i know from filming at night it is hard to to find street light, however they tried there best to find a location that has a fare amount of decent lighting. The costume was casual, they dressed the vampire in black, this may of been to shown the audience he is on the dark side, hes dull and misrable.

The sound i found was really effective, the heavy breathing fitted well with the film however in some parts of the film it could of been left out because it wasnt needed. The music fitted well with the genre and it had that spooky effect added to it.

Overall i would give this film a Level 3, the narrative was good but more shots could of been added.